^ #1 2016-06-27 11:55:36

Ambivalence

I like older women

From: r/depthhub

Registered: 2016-05-30

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Vocaloid thread

Post all things vocaloid here: music, fan art, cosplays, software related stuff etc.

Man, Vocaloid's popularity has really gone downhill all the years.

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Don't use “thought” verbs too much: thinks, understands, loves, hates, and a hundred others. Instead of characters knowing, present the details that allow the reader to know them. Instead of a character wanting something, describe the thing so that the reader wants it. Only specific sensory detail: smell, taste, and sound.