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^ #1 2016-07-11 10:42:19

I like older women
From: r/depthhub
Registered: 2016-05-30
Posts: 112

Visual Novels general

Discuss all kinds of VNs in this thread.

I just finished the introductory chapter, and WA2's pacing is really fucking slow, I hope it becomes the emotional nuke it is in the closing chapter.

Last edited by Ambivalence (2016-07-11 10:45:10)

Don't use “thought” verbs too much: thinks, understands, loves, hates, and a hundred others. Instead of characters knowing, present the details that allow the reader to know them. Instead of a character wanting something, describe the thing so that the reader wants it. Only specific sensory detail: smell, taste, and sound.


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