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I spent 12 hours making a YTPMV of iDubbbzTV to Renard's Song Intensive Care Unit, although think I should actually do Rainbow Tylenol.. What the hell am I doing with my life.
Been dormant for a while because I've been settling to life after I was admitted into the School of Engineering in the University of Science and Technology in Hong Kong.
I decided to listen to the band Tool because so many people say it's a great band, and now I have a question:
Isn't Tool just like Linkin Park?
I mean complex time signatures and mass-marketing attitudes aside, they're just basically kind of the same:
- Angry, harsh, introspective lyrics that sounds "3edgy5me". In fact, some of the Tool lyrics are probably more offensive and scandalous than Linkin Park(The album "Aenima" satirizes commercialism through metaphors about fist-fucking, enema, and yuppies drowning in L.A.).
- The "Alternative Metal" sound with Heavy Metal distortions and riffs, tempered with elements from Alternative Rock.
So why are all these people saying Linkin Park is better than Tool? Is it because of the pseudo-intellectuals that gets an orgasm every time some-one kicks an A&R representative from the mainstream music industry in the balls?
Did the first chapter of the RWBY fanfic, I don't regret anything:
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HOW THE FUCK DID YOU FIGURE OUT THAT I WAS A ROBOTIC ARM ATTACHED WITH A PLASTIC HEAD
Guy with album covers of awesome music as their avatar coming through, don't mind me.
Some chapters and paragraphs of the Japanese paperback edition were not included in the English translation. Combining the original three-volumes (Japanese) would have been too long, and so the publisher requested that ~25,000 words be cut for the English translation.[2]
For example, the two missing chapters from the second volume of the original three-volume elaborate on the relationship between Toru Okada and Creta Kano, and a "hearing" of the wind-up bird as Toru burns a box of Kumiko's belongings. In the third volume, the computer conversation between Toru and Noboru Wataya and Toru's encounter with Ushikawa at the train station are also omitted.
In addition to reducing the word count, some chapters were moved ahead of others, taking them out of the context of the original order.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Wind- … _ChronicleWell shit.
It's these little things that make me infinitely grateful that I learned other languages when I was young.
Hika wrote:But has anyone read Norwegian Wood though?
THAT SHITS TERRIBLE AND OVERRATED
i read it and its fucking terrible and sleazy and. gods.
I agree, Wound Up Bird Chronicle is better
I'm stuck in Win 10 because I still don't know how the fuck to install Ubuntu. Cortana is becoming this possessive clingy girl that can't be turned off(pun intended) or uninstalled.
stop.
OK.
Koma actually had a speck of talent in presenting the complete, vivid image of an action, and it would have been better if Koma hadn't rushed to omit the more physical details of Miki's mutilation, and Hisao's exhilaration. The dialogue is also laughably awkward and abrupt at the later phases.
But perhaps the subject matter was too disturbing and morbid.
Let's talk about something else, anyone a fan of the SCP Foundation?
Read my Katawa Shoujo fanfic while you're at it, Miki fans prepare.
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Overall the writing is pretty good, and it was a terrific read. I especially enjoyed the details when Hisao striked at Miki's mouth, and would have like more of these rich imagery in the following mutilations. E.g. I slid my knife across her eyes , and two streams of white viscous substance streamed out between the two semi-circles in both of her eyes. Or an indistinguishable sound emerged from her larynx. From it I heard the heavenly sound of her larynx bubbling like blowing through a straw in a cup of water, through her red flowing bodily fluids while she desperately inhaled for breath" or something like that. As tupsu said, I'm a shitty writer, and I need an editor. Some helpful advice is that you could use more metaphors or similes to impress so readers could picture more easily the scenes. I also don't get the audience and the waiter's reaction because it was comically absurd, or maybe that's the point.
>RWBY
Koma wrote:fucking ew
As fucked up as it sounds, I want to write a RWBY fan-fic in an ASOIAF fashion, with class, ideology, and faction conflicts, political intrigue, immersive POVs, mature themes and topics, and deaths piling up.
Decided to write some really shitty RWBY fan-fic, here's a portion of the imaginary fight between Blake Belladonna and Ruby Rose because Blake was sent as some double agent, and some misunderstandings happened. The first part of the fight is currently around 600 words and pretty long, so I put it in a spoiler box.
Please provide some potential insight if possible. I know I use too much verbs for the same time, but I couldn't find a better word that carries the same connotations.
P.S. iwl.me says I write like Stephen King. Close enough.
P.P.S. Because run-on sentences need to be eradicated.
The PC Port is shit
So, this petition is one name off since Hades Izanami signed twice? I'm in.
"Saying that you're a nice guy is like a restaurant whose only selling point is that the food doesn't make you sick."
Holy shit, I wasn't expecting a sentence of this excellent caliber from Cracked.