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I've had an absolute rubbish day and that yodelling is making me feel a lot better thank you
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yO7MWuJ7zLA
(´・ω・`)
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vIUego_1QBk
Recently stumbled upon this nice progessive album
Everyone has a belief system, B.S., the trick is to learn not to take anyone's B.S. too seriously, especially your own.
No one is free as long as someone is in prison.
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Everyone has a belief system, B.S., the trick is to learn not to take anyone's B.S. too seriously, especially your own.
No one is free as long as someone is in prison.
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Don't use “thought” verbs too much: thinks, understands, loves, hates, and a hundred others. Instead of characters knowing, present the details that allow the reader to know them. Instead of a character wanting something, describe the thing so that the reader wants it. Only specific sensory detail: smell, taste, and sound.
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Last edited by Twisted Fantasy (2016-08-06 16:07:50)
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