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^ #1 2016-05-30 14:25:59
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Homestuck general
It all went downhill after (S) Cascade. Act 6 dragged, (S) Collide went according to plan, when it's not supposed to, and (S) Act 7......what will happen to all these characters and dangling loose ends?
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Don't use “thought” verbs too much: thinks, understands, loves, hates, and a hundred others. Instead of characters knowing, present the details that allow the reader to know them. Instead of a character wanting something, describe the thing so that the reader wants it. Only specific sensory detail: smell, taste, and sound.
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^ #3 2016-05-30 17:34:40
Re: Homestuck general
It all went downhill after (S) Cascade. Act 6 dragged, (S) Collide went according to plan, when it's not supposed to, and (S) Act 7......what will happen to all these characters and dangling loose ends?
it already ended you fucking coconut, I almost feel tempted to find out what happened just to spoil you fucks
Its over man. Time to go home and forget this thing ever existed.
pack it up boys, we need a safe space for the safe space
(´･ω･`)
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