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^ #1 2016-05-30 14:25:59

Ambivalence
I like older women
From: r/depthhub
Registered: 2016-05-30
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Homestuck general

It all went downhill after (S) Cascade. Act 6 dragged, (S) Collide went according to plan, when it's not supposed to, and (S) Act 7......what will happen to all these characters and dangling loose ends?

Last edited by Ambivalence (2016-05-30 14:26:09)


Don't use “thought” verbs too much: thinks, understands, loves, hates, and a hundred others. Instead of characters knowing, present the details that allow the reader to know them. Instead of a character wanting something, describe the thing so that the reader wants it. Only specific sensory detail: smell, taste, and sound.

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^ #2 2016-05-30 14:43:37

Granger
Cash Money
From: Germany, Kebabland
Registered: 2015-10-20
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Re: Homestuck general

Its over man. Time to go home and forget this thing ever existed.


Life is like a box of chocolates. But theres no candies in there for you.

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^ #3 2016-05-30 17:34:40

tupsu
Sales Manager
From: south finland
Registered: 2016-05-19
Posts: 1,310
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Re: Homestuck general

Ambivalence wrote:

It all went downhill after (S) Cascade. Act 6 dragged, (S) Collide went according to plan, when it's not supposed to, and (S) Act 7......what will happen to all these characters and dangling loose ends?

it already ended you fucking coconut, I almost feel tempted to find out what happened just to spoil you fucks

Granger wrote:

Its over man. Time to go home and forget this thing ever existed.

pack it up boys, we need a safe space for the safe space


(´・ω・`)

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