Can't see the image... fucking pixiv referer...
Regardless, nice drawing. Now draw something that's not your waifu, Saber. Something like, Gilgamesh. *nudge*
Brian should draw more cute girls doing cute things.
The original and not that king of thieves Aurelianus/Gilgamesh.
God please no don't ruin your art with stupid tumblr noses goddamn.
I'm not asking for a tumblr nose, I'm asking for slightly more definition - right now I can barely see there IS anything defining the nose
I get that it's meant to be a part of the art style and that's all good, but it's completely vanishing into the shadow line right now - honestly it'd probably even be fine if it was very slightly offset and thickened/tapered to provide the feeling of depth, like in this:
https://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/lo … 0-1024.jpg
(I don't know the original chara so I just went with the one you always talk about, + you could probably achieve that effect by changing the shadow but it's more complicated and I don't know how to crit that well)
currently it looks like she has a hair-thin nose with no nostrils or anything of the like, hence my comment about shark nose which is notoriously flat http://s.hswstatic.com/gif/poking-sharks-eyes-3.jpg
I can't get the image embed to work normally because wikia are twats
I'm also disappointed ipep thinks I want tumblr noses on things, that's just offensive
SECOND EDIT: I just went through all of the art thread just because (god so many links are dead because puush is awful), and honestly brian's noses seem to be kinda 70/30: 70% of the time they're alright, visible and understandable, and 30% of the time they're either not there at all or are just a bit too faint. I could give a full individual rundown but that'd probably take a bit too much time, I should be writing not sperging about noses
Last edited by tupsu (2017-08-27 11:12:19)
now, i aint no artist, but to me even this looks better in this particular picture (though i agree on any negative thoughts about my positioning of the nose, my (and tupsu's) point still stands)